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Lizzie Michalak's avatar

Thank you!! Number two is super helpful! I just finished the first draft and I’m already tearing it apart 😂 this is super helpful as I go through and figure out what needs to change!

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Andrea Bartz's avatar

It's such a fun thing to play with in your writing. Happy revising!

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Jacqueline Faber's avatar

I actually LOLed at "you don't need to go full HGTV." Laughed all over again when I just quoted it.

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Andrea Bartz's avatar

Your comment made me lol!

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Alex Segura's avatar

Great piece!

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Andrea Bartz's avatar

Thanks, Alex!

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